When we think about writing, we often think about plotting action to drive a narrative forward. However, taking an extra step and separating the external plot from the internal plot can deliver not just momentum to your novel, but character development.
Let’s think about this by following the plot of a tale we all know: A Christmas Carol by Charles Dickens (I often choose this story, and you might ask why. It’s because it’s a tale we’re pretty much all aware of, even if we haven’t read it!)
External:
Scrooge is introduced, refuses to go to his nephew’s house, and refuses to give to those collecting for charity.
Internal:
Scrooge is a lonely, bitter man who cannot value the true meaning of wealth.
External:
Scrooge is visited by his old business partner’s ghost, Marley, who tells him there will be three more hauntings.
Internal:
Scrooge is met by Marley, someone he respected and cared for, who helps him see that there is more to his behaviour than he might suspect.
External:
The Ghost of Christmas Past visits and takes Scrooge back to his memories of childhood.
Internal:
Scrooge’s heart is opened by what he sees. He remembers the joy of playing with friends and his love for his sister.
I’m sure you see where I’m going with this! When you’re writing, think about your plot points, and for each plot point, consider: What is the story here? What internal journey will your external plot take your character on, and how will that develop them?
I can’t wait to see where your story goes! If you want to talk about this further, click here.