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Foreboding vs Foreshadowing

foreboding vs foreshadowing

 

Let’s talk about foreboding and foreshadowing. They sound similar, but they do different things in your novel and are both very effective in their own right.

Here’s what each does and how to utilise them effectively:

Foreboding:

You may have heard the phrase, ‘Filled with a sense of foreboding,’ or perhaps you have even said it yourself! It means that you feel impending disaster, a concern for the future. Are we going to talk about The Lord of the Rings now? Yes, of course we are. I can barely get through a blog post without mentioning it. Galadriel has the gift of seeing visions in her ‘mirror’, so she has more than foreboding; she has the skill of predicting an outcome based on a set of circumstances. Frodo looks into the mirror and sees the destruction of the Shire, the arrest of his friends, and more. Now, this is a slightly different way of showing foreboding; it isn’t the witches in Macbeth relaying their sense that ‘something wicked this way comes,’ and therefore indicating a shift to the reader, but it is a hint of what could be, at what Frodo fears might happen, should he fail in his duty to destroy the one ring. Foreboding, therefore, hints at peril on the horizon, making the tension in the story that much stronger. Whether or not that peril comes to pass is up to you as the author.

Foreshadowing:

Foreshadowing is different. Foreshadowing is about dropping breadcrumbs that your reader may not even notice until they have seen the whole loaf of bread at the end of the novel. You might foreshadow by planting an image, a detail, that won’t be significant until a final reveal. Foreshadowing can also be in dialogue, like in Romeo and Juliet, when Juliet declares, “If he be married / My grave is like to be my wedding bed.” When you first hear this, you think that she is talking about the depth of her love, in that way that young lovers do, when it feels like the very emotion is life and death. What is being foreshadowed, however, is that she is exactly right. There’s no exaggeration here, but we won’t know that until the end. So, if foreboding creates tension, what does foreshadowing do? It can create a deeper connection between your reader and the narrative, giving them an ‘Oh!’ moment when they see how an incident has been foreshadowed. It can also keep a reader curious, throw them off the scent (red herrings are a classic foreshadowing tool; only the things you’re foreshadowing are irrelevant), and ultimately, is an enticing tool that makes a novel memorable.

As a side note, too much of anything is never good (unless it is cheese, perhaps). Too much foreboding will do the opposite of your intention, desensitising the reader to the tension in the story. Too much foreshadowing will make the story predictable and will signpost what’s to come.

Found this blog post helpful? Check out the following:

What Is ‘The Sacred Flaw’ In Writing?

What Does It Mean to Edit for Genre?

What Does It Mean to Write What You Know?

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Is Your Metric for Author Success Becoming a Problem?

Is Your Metric for Author Success Becoming a Problem?

Do you feel like every time you log onto Instagram someone else is sharing that they have an agent or an amazing publishing deal? If only 1 out of 1000 authors get an agent, why does it seem like that?

I’ll tell you why: your reality is being distorted by confirmation bias and selective attention. It’s like choosing to buy a red car, and suddenly seeing only red cars everywhere.

Here’s the truth of it: If your focus is purely on traditional publishingas a success metric, you’re going to miss out on the diverse experiences and perspectives in the writing community, and, unless you become that 1 in 1000, you’re going to find the experience far less rewarding than you would if you changed your metric of success.

And here’s the brutal truth: your dream agent or publisher may never materialise, but don’t panic, because there’s also good news: traditional publishing isn’t the only path to share your story.

If you are comparing upwards, which means making a comparison to the people who you believe are incredibly successful, you are doing yourself a disservice. You are forgetting to see how lucky you are, how intelligent you are, how talented you are at writing, how much joy it brings. It’s essential to think about what success means to you as an author. For me, it is readers enjoying my work.

Without exaggeration, redefining your metric for author success could change your life, and bring so much more joy into your writing world.

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5 Things I Wish I Had Known before Writing My First Novel

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Six Books on Writing I Recommend

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Let’s chat about my favourite, and by that I mean my most recommended, books on writing. Why? Because if reading is how you become a better writer (spoiler alert, it is), imagine how great you’ll be if you’re reading about writing.

The Emotional Wound Thesaurus by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi.

There are several books in this incredible series, from the Emotion Thesaurus’ to the Urban Setting Thesaurus, but this is my favourite. It is an unflinching examination of everything that could happen to a person, with triggers that might come from that, aftershocks, character traits, behaviours, and more. When it comes to creating a character and developing a plot around them (writing a character-driven novel), this book is so helpful that it ought to sit pride of place on your bookshelf. In fact, mine sits right beside me on my study desk, as I dip into it so often.

Still Writing: The Perils and Pleasures of a Creative Life – Dani Shapiro.

I have probably spoken about this before on the blog or in newsletters somewhere because this book is a firm fave and has been for years. If I were ever to gift a fellow writer a book, it would be this one. Why? Because it will give you insight into the life of a writer and, in doing so, make you feel seen. It’s a mixture of craft, memoir, and what it means to write. In short, it’s pretty wonderful.

Writing from the Senses: 59 Exercises to Ignite Creativity and Revitalize Your Writing – Laura Deutsch.

I found this book at a campsite book swap in the South Island, New Zealand. And it’s stunning. It focuses on that thing that really grabs your readers and pulls them into a story: the five senses. It is full of exercises and clever ideas to help you create.

How to Write Like Tolstoy – Richard Cohen

My inlaws gifted me this book when I graduated from my PhD. Then, it had just come out, and the title amused me. But, this isn’t really a book on how to write like Tolstoy, but it is an investigation into many storytellers’ processes, and it’s fascinating for it. It’s a very readable book, and I honestly think that even if you weren’t a writer, you would probably enjoy it!

Wonderbook – The Illustrated Guide to Creating Imaginative Fiction – Jeff Vandermeer.

In terms of books on writing, this has got to be the most visually beautiful one ever written. This is for all you fantasy writers, and it is full of information focusing on craft and motivation. It has essays from some of the greats in it, too. I find myself dipping into this often, and its illustrations make it so enjoyable to read.

Taking Reality by Surprise – Susan Sellers.

I purchased this book in 2006 when I went to university for my undergraduate degree in Creative Writing. It still sits on my bookshelf today and is a great resource I use often. It has craft guidance with exercises and very practical advice, and I find the level of detail in what you need to undertake the tasks and exercises so valuable.

I would love to hear about the books you recommend. What is your favourite book on writing? Let me know!

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Is Your Character Comfortable with Their Status?

Character status
Are You Comfortable with Your Status?

Oh, sorry, not you. Your character.

Let’s chat about it. Your character’s comfort in their status can say a lot about them. It can be a window into their mindset, confidence, and more.

Let’s explore this for just a moment (with an excellent example from How To Own The Room by Viv Groskop):

Your character is at a cocktail party. It’s a fancy, black-tie affair, and everyone is dressed up. Your character is wearing a suit, bowtie, and, it turns out, exactly the same attire as the waiting staff at the party. A peer walks into the room, looks around, and catches eye with your character. They go over, and instead of introducing themselves, they ask for a martini.

Now, pause for a moment…

What does your character do?

If your answer is that your character makes the martini, gives it to their peer, and laughs about it later with a friend, your character is happy with their status.

If your answer is that your character tells this person exactly who they are and that they should check themselves, getting irate, your character is unhappy with their status.

And so, if they’re unhappy with their status in society, in life, with their friends, what does this do to your novel? It creates a storyview* in which your character is prone to be the victim, ready to take offence, and quick to rise in temper. This, in turn, changes how you might introduce your character and what might drive your plot forward. Think of how they speak to other people (or dragons, depending on what you’re writing), how they dress, who they strive to be and where they want to go.

Could your character’s comfort level in their status be their sacred flaw? (Not sure what I’m talking about? Check out last month’s blog post!).

*Not a typo! Storyview vs Worldview is a concept explained by Jeff Vandermeer in Wonderbook – The Illustrated Guide to Creating Imaginative Fiction, chapter 6. 

 

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How to Work with Me When I’m Fully Booked

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If you’ve come here looking for editing and coaching help and can see that the banner above says I’m fully booked, don’t panic! I book up very quickly, between 10 months to a year in advance, but 1:1 is not the only way to work with me. Check out the following:

The Novel Writing Masterclass

This course includes 40 bite-size classes that fit into your busy life, designed to take you from idea to publication.

It’s been created with you in mind:

  • The person who wants to write but can’t find the time.
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  • The person who isn’t sure what comes next when writing their novel.

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  • Finding the time in your week to write.
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Are you a writer looking for your community?

The Fiction Fellowship focuses on fiction writers who are looking to connect with other creatives and hone their storytelling skills. Learning with others and having writing friends can make such a difference to your productivity and motivation, so we aim to provide an environment where you can make those connections and feel inspired to write.

With twice-weekly writing sprints, monthly community calls, and more, we’ll be with you every step of the way to help you develop your writing skills, expand your craft knowledge, and make progress in your writing.

What’s included:

  • Community Sessions
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Run by myself and Isobelle of Inspired Creative Co, and we know that finding your writing community can lead to great things. So far, our writers have written over a million words!

If that’s what you’re looking for, then this is your space!

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Writing Workbooks

Are you feeling overwhelmed at the prospect of writing? Are you struggling to find the time to write, unsure about creating a writing routine, and undecided about your writing goals?

If this sounds like you, it’s time to invest in yourself.

I have workbooks available if you are ready to:
  • Find time to write
  • Create a writing routine that fits with YOUR schedule
  • Identify writing areas you would like more information on
  • Set and achieve writing goals
  • Reach your targets and see a way forward
  • Take action and plan your writing year in full

Otherwise, make sure you’re on my email list here, and when I have space again, you’ll be among the first to know.

 

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What Is ‘The Sacred Flaw’ In Writing?

The Sacred Flaw

Have you ever heard the term ‘the sacred flaw’ when talking about writing? It’s a common concept and one that is often discussed in writing groups. So, whether or not you have heard of it, let’s chat about what it is and what that phrase means.

‘The sacred flaw’ is a phrase coined by author Will Storr. In its simplest terms, Storr uses it to explain how to build a story as a brain builds a life. He explains that we understand reality by telling ourselves stories. (As a side note, this is the very origin of Creative Writing, the communication of narrative as a way to frame the world around us.)

Storr says: ‘We experience life in three acts, with a crisis, a struggle and resolution.’ (https://theelementsofwriting.com/storr/)

Storr goes on to explain an idea I wrote to you about weeks ago: the difference between character-driven stories and plot-driven stories. When writing a character-driven story, you begin with the character. Storr recommends doing the same to find ‘the sacred flaw’ of your story and then creating the plot around that character to ‘test’ that flaw. Essentially, we are trying to find your character’s ‘flawed idea about the world’ (Storr).

Here are some questions to help you discover a belief that your character finds ‘sacred’ (if you’re struggling to think of what this might mean, let’s use one of my favourite examples, Scrooge from A Christmas Carol. Scrooge mistakenly believes that money and wealth are sacred. The plot tests this mistaken theory throughout, ultimately giving him a different belief system by the end, where the very meaning of ‘wealth’ changes):

  • What experience might have given your character their belief? (For Scrooge, it was his childhood.)
  • How does this cause them to view the world? (Think storyview [how your character sees the world] vs worldview [how the world really is].)
  • How will you create a plot and series of events that challenge this belief, this ‘sacred flaw’?

At the heart of this concept is an understanding that the story is about the character’s journey and change.

So, now we know what ‘the sacred flaw’ means and how to find it. Tell me, what is your character’s ‘sacred flaw’?

Found this interesting and want to read more about this concept? Check out:

In Conversation with Will Storr

 

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Five Things I Won’t Do as Your Editor and Coach

5 Things I Won’t Do as Your Editor and Coach

As an editor and writing coach, I’ve spoken at length about how I can help you. But there are things I won’t do, too. Let’s dig into them:

1: Force you to follow ‘the rules’ of writing a novel. I know the rules (after all, I studied them for eight years in higher education) and know that great things can happen when you break them. I will tell you the rule, give you the reasoning behind it, and let you know what I think is the right way forward, but ultimately, I will support whatever decision you make from there on out. The Promise, by Damon Galgut, breaks a heck of a lot of rules. It went on to win the Booker Prize in 2021. Writing is art, and sometimes art breaks the rules.

2: Use my experience to guide your journey. A coach is trained to facilitate growth in a niche area, and in my case, this is writing. Coaching is 80% client and 20% coach, meaning that a trained coach will pull a solution to a problem from your mind instead of their own. Why does this matter? Everyone has different backgrounds, levels of responsibility and pressure, working hours, etc. My writing journey has nothing to do with yours, and while I will share my experience if you ask, I will never expect you to do as I have done. There is a difference between a coach and a mentor. A mentor is someone who will share a personal experience and journey to help guide you in a similar one. A coach is someone who is trained to facilitate your own journey, using their knowledge to assist but not drive. A mentor does not need a qualification, but a coach does. Coaching is often believed to be an unregulated field. However, this is not the case. Coaching is regulated worldwide by the International Coaching Federation, so when looking for a coach, ensure the ICF accredits their course to confirm they know how to work in their field. I have trained as a coach in an ICF-accredited role and by doing an ILM Level 2 (equivalent to a GCSE, although now I’m showing my age!).

3: Put pressure on you to finish your work within a specific timeframe. Ask any of my clients, and you’ll find I am flexible when working together. There’s a reason for that. Writing, art, creation, and growth are not linear. We cannot expect someone to write a novel within twelve weeks just because that’s a package that has been purchased. If that’s what you want to do, I will work hard alongside you to help you achieve your goal, but if you decide that you need support over an extended period of time, that you need a break, that you would rather meet monthly than weekly, that’s what we will do. Magic happens when people are given space to discover their journey.

4: Change your unique writing voice and style. I edit while ensuring that your voice remains your own, and while I offer constructive feedback on clarity, how to create the best flow, and areas where a rewrite would strengthen the story, your voice is yours, and that’s something no one can copy or change. That means that I’ll also tell you when you’re writing something that doesn’t quite match your usual tone, too, so that we can provide a consistent reading experience across novels.

5: Force you into a ‘one size fits all’ framework. In editing and coaching, I work to ensure that I’m helping the reader in a way that they understand, can collaborate with, and engage with. There is no ‘one way’ to write a novel, and I don’t subscribe to the idea that all stories must fit within a specific structure (see point one!). Writing is a personal process, so whatever your process is, I will adapt to ensure you’re getting the most out of our time together. If you don’t know your process yet, we can explore that.

So, there are five things I will not do as an editor and coach! I’m almost booked for the entire year but have a few spaces left from June onwards. If you want to learn more, book a Discovery Call with me here.

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“Why Would I Need a Writing Coach?”

Why hire a writing coach?

Have you ever asked yourself, “Why would I need a writing coach?”

If so, here are some possible reasons.

1) Having space held for you can change everything.

It’s not every day that you can expect someone to give you their full attention, and that’s fair enough. But when they do, amazing things can happen. Coaching is a wonderful experience, and it’s partly because of this. Having someone hold that space for you, listen to what you are saying without interruption, and ask the right questions can help you reveal solutions you didn’t even realise existed. A coach listens to your words without judgment in a safe space. This alone has helped me become a better, happier, and more fulfilled person.

2) Coaching can build on success, not just solve problems.

Did you know that coaching isn’t just for specific problems? Nope, coaching also builds on success. For example, you don’t have to be struggling with a writing routine or draft to hire a writing coach; you can also be having the most prolific writing period of your life and want it to continue. You could be finding yourself motivated every day to create and want to investigate the set of circumstances that led you there so that you can keep being your best self.

Coaching to build on success is a great way to invest in yourself. It’s saying, ‘Hey, things are going great, and long may they continue. In fact, I’ll make sure they do.’

I continue to invest in a coaching programme because I want to continue building on my success.

3) Having someone rooting for you can hold you accountable.

It’s not the deadlines a coach gives that hold me accountable; it’s the fact that they are rooting for me personally. Coaching is a professional relationship with a difference—you have someone on your team who believes in you and your progress. The thought of sharing my achieved tasks with my coach makes me happy because I’m excited to move forward with them in our next session, not because I’m afraid of missing a deadline.

4) Positive change starts with you.

Depending on what you opt for, you only have a coach for an hour or so a week or even a month. Outside of this time, it’s down to the client to make what has been discussed work for them. I spend a good few hours a week working on my action points and planning for my coaching sessions.  Whatever it is, I make sure that I take responsibility for that positive change in my life outside of my coaching sessions. Coaching gives me the action points to work from, but the action comes from me.

5) Investing in yourself is about much more than money.

When you give yourself the opportunity of time, education, and accountability, investing in yourself becomes about more than money. It becomes about believing in yourself and setting yourself up for success. I made a private video around four years ago. It was me talking to my new coach about where I currently was in my business, life, and expectations. She was the one who told me to make it because it would be interesting to look back on later. Well, four years later, I’ve just watched it! It was amazing to see the growth of those years. I know that coaching helped me get there, and I am so grateful for that reminder of how far I have come.

Have you ever been coached, and if so, what did you learn? I would love to know, so share it with me today! And don’t forget, I open up my Discovery Calls in March! 

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What Does It Mean to Edit for Genre?

Editing genre

 

Hey writer. When we’re editing, it helps to think about the genre we are writing in. Why? Because your reader sees a genre and comes to your work filled with all sorts of expectations. It can be really fun to subvert reader expectations, so don’t think I’m telling you to stick to genre conventions forever! Instead, use this blog post as a helpful guide for editing for genre to give your readers exactly what they want.

What are genre conventions?

They are the common elements of a story in a specific genre. For example, what pops into your head when someone says high fantasy? You might think of a fictional setting, a quest, magical elements, good vs evil.

Oh! You mean tropes!

Well, not quite, no. You see, there is a difference between genre conventions and tropes. Genre conventions define a genre – if we’re talking high fantasy, we might expect a quest. A trope is a plot device or story element frequently appearing in a genre – but they are not essential to the structure or foundation. A quest within a magical world defines a genre, whereas a trope, like the classic ‘only one bed’ in romance, adds flavour to a narrative. Think of it like a cake – the cake is made up of genre conventions, and the tropes are the toppings – they add spice!

Okay, now we understand what genre conventions are; it’s time to research the conventions of your genre. You can do this in lots of ways, but a great one is to think about your favourite books in that genre. Let’s say you love romance. What conventions from romance do you want to make sure your story has? First of all, it will have to include that genre convention that makes romance what it is – love! Then, you can think about happily ever afters. You’ll want your character to grow and develop – and remember to add some chemistry.

Once you know which genre conventions you will use, consider the pacing. Different genres have different paces (thrillers are fast-paced, which means they use cliffhangers, short, sharp sentences, and high tension to keep you on the edge of your seat and turning the page). If you’re writing a classic romance story, go with a slower pace than an action-packed romance. Again, this means doing a little research. If you want to know more about pacing your writing, check out this blog post here: 3 Ways to Ensure Your Novel is Well Paced

Once you have your pacing figured out, think about your character development. Genre conventions can dictate how your characters develop, too. In romance, the development is often internal, learning to love oneself before they can love another. In fantasy, the development is external, too, with the main character becoming stronger and more capable, learning to fight so that they can save the world. How does your chosen genre dictate your character’s development?

Next, think about your world-building and setting. When editing for genre conventions, consider what you have created carefully. Does your setting fit with the expectations of an urban fantasy? Is there anything you have written that doesn’t feel realistic in the world you are writing about?

Lastly, don’t worry about lack of originality. When paying close attention to genre conventions, it can feel like you’re writing something that has gone before. However, your voice is your own, and your writing is unlike anyone else. While you should be aware of genre conventions and reader expectations, don’t be afraid to blend genres, make different choices, or add unexpected elements. This is your story, after all!

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Which Is the Best Plotting Method for You?

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My Top Five Humorous Fantasy Reads

Humorous Fantasy

After publishing my novel, The Finery, a joyful romp through a dystopian fantasy setting, I thought I would share my top five humorous fantasy reads.

Men at Arms By Terry Pratchett

Fantasy novels can be cosy, adventurous, exciting, and joyful — and it’s that last one that Pratchett really embraces in all of his Discworld novels. Whenever I want to slip on some comfortable shoes and visit the cobbled streets of Ankh-Morpork, it’s the path of Captain Sam Vines I follow. All of the city-watch stories have their own delightful tales of misadventure, but Men at Arms follows Captain Vines trying to recruit new staff, and his difficulty facing change, alongside Pratchett’s pearls of wisdom such as “Pride is all very well, but a sausage is a sausage,” makes this an enchanting fantastical read.

The Princess Bride by William Goldman

You may have seen the classic cult movie, and though that is a delight, the book is much better. Goldman cleverly writes as though he is abridging an original work by a writer named Morgenstern, and his witty prose makes this book hard to put down. It’s a classic adventure full of sword fights, love, intrigue, and, most importantly, joy. I can’t recommend this enough to a fantasy fan who enjoys a slice of humour.

Kill the Farm Boy by Delilah S Dawson and Kevin Hearne

You know you’re looking at a humorous fantasy novel when the necromancer is called Steve. This story takes one of my favourite fantasy tropes (the chosen one) and adds a dash of hilarity to his journey. There’s an assassin who is afraid of chickens, and a trash-talking goat. So, if you’re looking for a light-hearted adventure, this is for you.

Sorcery of Thorns by Margaret Rogerson

This novel has the sort of cover that makes me cross a bookstore at speed, and it more than delivers once the book is opened. This story has a ton of humour and wit, and the magical setting is a real adventure for any fantasy fan.

The Finery by Rachel Grosvenor

When I started writing The Finery, I had a few points in mind. The first was that I had realised that the older I get, the more likely I am to have the ability to deliver the ring to Mount Doom (if you’re not sure what I’m talking about, see: Tolkien). Older women are badass, and when centenarian Professor Wendowleen Cripcot finds herself facing the power of an ever-growing government regime in the winter of her life, she doesn’t stand down. Sprinkled with humour, fantastical realism, and a wolf sidekick who will stop at nothing to get a good breakfast, The Finery is a lively mix of Pratchett and Orwell. Big Brother is watching you…but he probably needs glasses.

What would you add?