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Editing for Genre – Meeting Your Reader’s Expectations

 

Hey writer. When we’re editing, it helps to think about the genre we are writing in. Why? Because your reader sees a genre and comes to your work filled with all sorts of expectations. It can be really fun to subvert reader expecations, so don’t think I’m telling you to stick to genre conventions forever! Instead, use this blog post as a helpful guide for editing for genre to give your readers exactly what they want.

What are genre conventions?

They are the common elements of a story in a specific genre. For example, what pops into your head when someone says high fantasy? You might think of a fictional setting, a quest, magical elements, good vs evil.

Oh! You mean tropes!

Well, not quite, no. You see, there is a difference between genre conventions and tropes. Genre conventions define a genre – if we’re talking high fantasy, we might expect a quest. A trope is a plot device or story element frequently appearing in a genre – but they are not essential to the structure or foundation. A quest within a magical world defines a genre, whereas a trope, like the classic ‘only one bed’ in romance, adds flavour to a narrative. Think of it like a cake – the cake is made up of genre conventions, and the tropes are the toppings – they add spice!

Okay, now we understand what genre conventions are; it’s time to research the conventions of your genre. You can do this in lots of ways, but a great one is to think about your favourite books in that genre. Let’s say you love romance. What conventions from romance do you want to make sure your story has? First of all, it will have to include that genre convention that makes romance what it is – love! Then, you can think about happily ever afters. You’ll want your character to grow and develop – and remember to add some chemistry.

Once you know which genre conventions you will use, consider the pacing. Different genres have different paces (thrillers are fast-paced, which means they use cliffhangers, short, sharp sentences, and high tension to keep you on the edge of your seat and turning the page). If you’re writing a classic romance story, go with a slower pace than an action-packed romance. Again, this means doing a little research. If you want to know more about pacing your writing, check out this blog post here: 3 Ways to Ensure Your Novel is Well Paced

Once you have your pacing figured out, think about your character development. Genre conventions can dictate how your characters develop, too. In romance, the development is often internal, learning to love oneself before they can love another. In fantasy, the development is external, too, with the main character becoming stronger and more capable, learning to fight so that they can save the world. How does your chosen genre dictate your character’s development?

Next, think about your world-building and setting. When editing for genre conventions, consider what you have created carefully. Does your setting fit with the expectations of an urban fantasy? Is there anything you have written that doesn’t feel realistic in the world you are writing about?

Lastly, don’t worry about lack of originality. When paying close attention to genre conventions, it can feel like you’re writing something that has gone before. However, your voice is your own, and your writing is unlike anyone else. While you should be aware of genre conventions and reader expectations, don’t be afraid to blend genres, make different choices, or add unexpected elements. This is your story, after all!

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My Top Five Humorous Fantasy Reads

After publishing my novel, The Finery, a joyful romp through a dystopian fantasy setting, I thought I would share my top five humorous fantasy reads.

Men at Arms By Terry Pratchett

Fantasy novels can be cosy, adventurous, exciting, and joyful — and it’s that last one that Pratchett really embraces in all of his Discworld novels. Whenever I want to slip on some comfortable shoes and visit the cobbled streets of Ankh-Morpork, it’s the path of Captain Sam Vines I follow. All of the city-watch stories have their own delightful tales of misadventure, but Men at Arms follows Captain Vines trying to recruit new staff, and his difficulty facing change, alongside Pratchett’s pearls of wisdom such as “Pride is all very well, but a sausage is a sausage,” makes this an enchanting fantastical read.

The Princess Bride by William Goldman

You may have seen the classic cult movie, and though that is a delight, the book is much better. Goldman cleverly writes as though he is abridging an original work by a writer named Morgenstern, and his witty prose makes this book hard to put down. It’s a classic adventure full of sword fights, love, intrigue, and, most importantly, joy. I can’t recommend this enough to a fantasy fan who enjoys a slice of humour.

Kill the Farm Boy by Delilah S Dawson and Kevin Hearne

You know you’re looking at a humorous fantasy novel when the necromancer is called Steve. This story takes one of my favourite fantasy tropes (the chosen one) and adds a dash of hilarity to his journey. There’s an assassin who is afraid of chickens, and a trash-talking goat. So, if you’re looking for a light-hearted adventure, this is for you.

Sorcery of Thorns by Margaret Rogerson

This novel has the sort of cover that makes me cross a bookstore at speed, and it more than delivers once the book is opened. This story has a ton of humour and wit, and the magical setting is a real adventure for any fantasy fan.

The Finery by Rachel Grosvenor

When I started writing The Finery, I had a few points in mind. The first was that I had realised that the older I get, the more likely I am to have the ability to deliver the ring to Mount Doom (if you’re not sure what I’m talking about, see: Tolkien). Older women are badass, and when centenarian Professor Wendowleen Cripcot finds herself facing the power of an ever-growing government regime in the winter of her life, she doesn’t stand down. Sprinkled with humour, fantastical realism, and a wolf sidekick who will stop at nothing to get a good breakfast, The Finery is a lively mix of Pratchett and Orwell. Big Brother is watching you…but he probably needs glasses.

What would you add?

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Characters Over the Age of Forty

If you take a moment to Google ‘Female fiction characters over the age of forty, the first thing that comes up is a sentence that reads, ‘Here are five female characters who can still kick ass, even after forty.’ (McCormack, Five Heroines Over the Age of Forty, Tor.com, Accessed 24/05/23)

It’s the ‘even after’ bit that bothers me, and let me tell you, as a woman who is closer to forty than thirty, I am far more likely to kick ass now than I was when I was twenty years old.

Representations of older women in fiction and on-screen is not a new conversation. Last year, Forbes wrote an article detailing a new report that explained that ‘at about the age of forty, female characters begin to disappear in substantial numbers from broadcast and streaming programs.’ (Elsesser, Women Over 40 Disappear From Television, Forbes.com, Accessed 20/05/23) Is fiction any different? There are some wonderful novels that include older female protagonists out there in the universe that I encourage you to read. However, that doesn’t mean that it’s the norm. With agents recommending to writers that their ‘protagonists age be taken down 20, even 30 years’ (Weldon, Writer’s of a Certain Age, NYTimes.com, Accessed 25/05/23), representation in fiction of how capable older women are is extremely important.

Ageism, (discrimination based on age), can be said to affect women more than men, which leads to a lack of representation of older women in storytelling. Readers have been able to follow the exploits of James Bond since the 1950’s, despite the fact that he himself is over forty. Yes, for the offerings of Sherlock Holmes, we have Miss Marple, but even those characters are treated differently in literature, with Holmes greatly respected by his peers, while Miss Marple is described as an ‘old pussy’ (Christie, A, Nemesis, Collins Crime Club, 1971).

When it came to writing my novel, The Finery, my protagonist came to me first. Professor Wendowleen Cripcot is a centenarian, a retired philosophy lecturer, and a badass. Her creation was driven by a few experiences. Having worked at a university myself for many years, I found that you occupy a strange space as a younger woman. I gained my PhD before I was thirty and found myself routinely tested due to my age. From second-year students sitting beside me at the front of the classroom pre-lecture and asking if I was in my first year, to other doctors repeatedly referring to me as an intern, it was a bizarre experience. I wondered what life would have been like had I stayed in academia. Well, probably something like Professor Cripcot’s experience. She is a woman hardened to the opinions of others, relentlessly confident in herself. In many ways, she is the woman I aspire to be, capable, brave and brazen in the face of threat.

Some of my favourite characters in fiction are older women. Take Granny Weatherwax from Terry Pratchett’s Discworld. Her belief in herself is inspiring, and on the whole, she’s right to have such faith in her abilities. Even her (spoiler alert) death is on her own terms, showing her laying herself to rest in her bed, with the full knowledge that her time has come.

Fiction and literature can have a huge impact on the world and society. One only needs to look at the book bans currently operating in the US to know how much of an impact people believe literature has, irrespective of the real-life implications. In addition, the world of publishing is famously hard to break into, with the odds for getting a novel released sitting at ‘between 1% and 2%’ (Talbot, Odds of Getting Published Statistics, wordsrated.com, Accessed 5/06/23), which leads to the question, who is getting an opportunity to present which characters?

Michael Handrick (Michael Handrick speaks about how the publishing industry needs to change to include more working-class writers, The Bookseller, Accessed 25/06/23) suggests that this is significant, when he says, ‘Literature has long been written and published by a small sector of our society. When that happens, inaccurate and one-dimensional depictions of minorities are a result.’ Though speaking specifically about working-class authors, Handrick’s comment makes a good point — if only a certain type of author is being accepted into traditional publishing, is it having an impact on characterisation in the literary canon?

Without the representation of older women in fiction, we would, quite simply, miss out on a world of wisdom. As author, Elena Ferrante (Elliot, Ferrantissimo, TheMonthly.com, Accessed 04/06/23) says, ‘I wouldn’t recognise myself without women’s struggles, women’s nonfiction, women’s literature — they made me an adult.’ I too, as an author, strive to represent the people I recognise in society. Look at Grandma Moses, who started her career in her seventies and held two honorary doctoral degrees. Badass older women should be on the pages of our books, they surround us in real life, if we take the time to look. Women do not disappear as they age, although it can feel that way, as described by writer Ayelet Waldman prior to her fiftieth birthday (Busch, The Invisibility of Older Women, The Atlantic, Accessed 6/06/23), ‘Suddenly, it’s like I just vanished from the room. And I have to yell so much louder to be seen. … I just want to walk down the street and have someone notice that I exist.’

None of this considers the very real issue of the representation of class and race in fiction and within the publishing industry as a whole. It is imperative that diverse authors and characters are presented to the world of readers, mirroring society. This is a strong reason to support both indie publishing and self-publishing, the former bypassing the gatekeepers to the literature market, and the latter creating their own opportunities to be read.

So, can women kick ass, ‘even after’ forty? You better believe it. If you’re looking to read about one such woman, check out The Finery (released by Fly on the Wall Press). When a totalitarian government starts to tighten its procedures, there’s one woman who can put its leader in his place. That woman is, you guessed it, Professor Wendowleen Cripcot. The Finery is inspired by genuine history, with a sprinkling of fantastical realism, and the older women who show the world just how capable they really are, whether the world is paying attention or not.

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The Draw of Fantastical Fiction

According to sales statistics, fantasy book sales grew by over 45% in 2021 compared to 2020, and I’m not a bit surprised to hear it. As a reader, I’ve always drifted toward the fantasy section in a bookshop, and as a writer, it was the promise of adventure that sparked my writing career.

            I began writing as a child after reading (you guessed it) The Lord of the Rings. As an elder millennial (I know, but I didn’t give myself that title), I was at that age when the movies started coming out just as I was allowed to go to the cinema to watch them with friends, alone. I had already read the books, and to see the characters come to life before me was thrilling. With Justified playing on my CD player, I would roll up my sleeves, stare for a while at my poster of Legolas, and begin writing fanfiction.

            The internet was different back then. I would post on a site where other Tolkien lovers would write their own fiction. Our characters would interact in Middle Earth, and I created a complex backstory for my elven warrior and her horse, Tengwar. By day, I was a mild-mannered Brummy student, but by night, my bow was my greatest weapon.

            I have always remembered the magic I felt at the keyboard of my family’s old-fashioned, loudly whirring computer. I would rush home excited to write, delighted to see updates from others, and I have striven to keep the same feeling.

            This is what fantasy offers me as a writer – excitement. Anything can happen, the world can be moulded into the magical. The mountains near my home become promises, begging to be traversed on a life-changing mission. The alleyways in my town hold secrets, bricks that, when pushed, reveal hidden houses and private rooms where witches dwell.

            As a reader, my favourite fantastical place to visit is Ankh-Morpork, the city of Terry Pratchett’s Discworld series. I had a similar cityscape in mind when writing my debut novel, The Finery (Fly on the Wall Press). Corruption and intrigue abound, but there is beauty there too. My main character, Professor Cripcot, is facing a very real situation – eviction. It isn’t that she overcomes this with magic, assisted by the aid of swords or bows and arrows, but rather that she is supported by those around her. The fantastical elements lie within the norms of everyday life – the care wolves given to older people, the tarot cards that truly reveal the future, and the underground network that survives for generations without sunlight. My writing has gone full circle in this way; I no longer pull fantasy into my real life but rather write my real life into fantasy. Perhaps that’s why fantasy book sales have shot up recently, the stress of the pandemic driving a desire to escape into a fantastical world.

As I write with my own wolf (really, more of a standard poodle) beside me, I do two things my education in writing taught me: I write what I know, and I add a dash of magic. After all, it’s that magic that leads me to both the keyboard and the fantasy bookshelf, every time.

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Fifteen Fantasy Books to Read When You Need a Break From Fiction

 

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Fifteen Books to Read When You Need a Break from Reality

It’s no surprise to me that sales of fantasy fiction increased by 45% in 2021, as the world struggled to get used to the new reality of the pandemic. We all longed to escape to a new landscape for just a moment, an opportunity to be somewhere else.  Now, as we have moved on a little, escapist fiction continues to be popular. As an author and an avid reader, I have my own favourites that I pull from the bookshelf time and time again. Here are fifteen of them, perfect as a diversion from the stresses of everyday life.

1: Once Upon a River by Diane Setterfield

A magical tale that pulls you straight in, and keeps you questioning the reality of the world the characters live in. There’s mystery and depth to this novel, with masterful storytelling, and once you read the first page and dip your toe into the river, you find yourself wading through until the end.

2: Hogfather by Terry Pratchett

A Christmas tale with a twist – Death fancies having a turn at being the jolly man in the red suit. I love all Discworld tales, and Hogfather is no exception. Any of the stories featuring Death and his sarcastic and practical granddaughter Susan, are a treat. If you need a break from reality, you could do worse than stepping into Ankh-Morpork. Just make sure you’re wearing comfortable shoes and have the number for the City Watch – you might need their help.

3: Of Bees and Mist by Erick Setiawan

This is a much-read favourite of mine, and Setiawan does a fantastic job of telling you the story as well as showing you, spanning years within pages, without making you feel as though you are missing something. This moody fairy tale has a rich setting, and it feels as though you really could step through the page and into this strange world of ghostly sights and true love.

4: The Littlest Library by Poppy Alexander

Not all escapist literature has to feature an otherworldly setting, and Poppy Alexander does a great job of writing cosy fiction you want to curl up with. Jess is starting a new chapter of her life, and following her gentle adventure and idea of turning a telephone box into a tiny library is just perfect for a warm and welcoming tale.

5: The Finery by Rachel Grosvenor

A murder. A story long forgotten. Government coercion. And at the centre of it all, a badass centenarian and her pet wolf, willing to fight for freedom. The Finery is a cosy tale with very real themes, that takes you on a journey through the land of Rytter. Grab your chestnut broth and a snack, because a knock will soon be coming on your door, and rebellion is brewing underground.

6: The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern

If you like your escapist fiction with a slice of whimsy, this is the book for you. Step into the circus and find out what is so enchanting about this novel. As a reader, I am particularly partial to anything that resembles the British Victorian era, so this story and its fairy-tale fantastical romance is the perfect break from reality.

7: A Sport and a Pastime by James Salter

To my mind, Salter is the master of setting description. When reading this, one really feels as though they are travelling through France, the worldbuilding is so rich and complex. This novel explores youth and eroticism, gender politics and love. It’s immersive, poetic, and will always be a favourite escape of mine. An adult read for an adult reader.

8: Stardust by Neil Gaiman

Forget the film, which couldn’t capture the joy of the novel, and focus on the prose instead. This is a fairy tale for adults, that transports you to the village of Wall, mystical and vivid in its description. A child born from magic, the attempted capture of a shooting star, and a fairy market that’ll make you grab your cloak and basket with haste, this is the ideal read for the end of a hard day, when really, only fantastical fiction will do.

9: The Other Bennet Sister by Janice Hardlow

There have been many novels written about the other Bennet girls (Pride and Prejudice) and what happened when the original book was closed, but in my opinion, this is the best. We see Mary, the often-ignored sister, grow in confidence and learn to step beyond her situation. It’s a well-written, true-to-the-original, modern classic, ideal for fans of Austen. If you wish you could read Pride and Prejudice all over again just for that feeling of stepping into Netherfield Hall, this is the novel for you.

10: The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss

The tale of a wizard and how he came to be all-powerful. Join Kote at The Waystone Inn for a pint and a chat about his life, and see where the journey takes you. If you’re a fan of stories within stories and have secretly always wished you were the mysterious person with their hood up in a fantastical tavern, you can do no wrong here.

11: Dune by Frank Herbert

This has been a Sci-Fi best seller for so long, and your invitation to visit Arrakis is well overdue. Leave your D.A.R.E t-shirt at home and watch out for the massive worms. You’ll be fine, it’s just a story. Right?

12: Behind the Scenes at the Museum by Kate Atkinson

I would be remiss not to put at least one book by Atkinson on this list, as her work is so immersive that every novel makes me feel as though I am stepping in the shoes of her well-developed characters. Behind the Scenes at the Museum is the tale of Ruby, who lives above a pet shop with her family, sees ghosts on the staircase and hears things she shouldn’t. Ruby’s tale is interspersed with the stories of the women in her family, taking you on a journey of dreams, heartache, and suspense.

13: True Grit by Charles Portis

I can’t be the only one who dreams of taking off along the wide-open plains on horseback, or the first reader who finds delightful escapism in sleeping under the stars. True Grit is your classic Western adventure tale, told from the point of view of one of the toughest young teenagers around. I wouldn’t mess with Mattie Ross because she takes revenge seriously.

14: Hyperion by Dan Simmons

Sci-Fi at its finest, set over a thousand years in the future. If you enjoy a narrative with multiple points of view, characters with compelling stories, and a somewhat frightening journey to distant planets, this story is your ideal form of escape. Step aboard.

15: The Eye of the World by Robert Jordan

If you are looking for more than a moment of escape, it’s time to step into the world of The Wheel of Time. You’ll find enough literature to last you at least a year, depending on how quickly you read, and its immersive story and memorable characters will drive you forward to reading all thirteen of the series. But, start with the first, The Eye of the World.

Any you would add? Let me know! If you’re looking for some fantastical women to go alongside this list, check out this blog post here!

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How to Collaborate with a Fellow Author

This week has been a lovely one, as I’ve been writing with fellow author, editor, and writing coach, Isobelle Lans of Inspired Creative Co. Isobelle joined me for a week in Wales and we decided to begin a project we’ve spoken about for a while – writing a novel together.

If you too are looking to collaborate with a fellow author, here are our top tips on making it work:

1 – Communication is key.

An obvious one but worth mentioning is communication. We all communicate in a different way, but being receptive and open to each other’s ideas is a big part of creative collaboration. Before writing together, consider how the other person communicates, how they prefer to write, and what you can both bring to the project.

2 – Giving constructive criticism.

How do you receive feedback? It’s an important subject to raise. I like the compliment sandwich, and clear informative information about how something can be improved. Identify something you like, and then explain how something could be changed and why you think this. Be open to discussion on that change, and remember that creative writing is a subject often close to the heart. Find a middle ground for what works for both of you, and don’t be afraid to refer back to point one.

3 – Respecting energy levels.

Everyone has different ways of writing and working throughout the day, and routines that they are comfortable with. If you find you write best in the morning but your creative friend writes best in the evening, come up with a schedule that suits the both of you.

4 – Encouraging each other.

Discuss open ideas with each other and be mindful of all of the above. Spur each other on and take regular breaks where you don’t discuss writing – creating together requires a relationship too!

5 – Sharing a plot.

Everyone’s ideas are valid, so remember to share a plot. If you have an idea that you feel strongly about, politely explore it and allow your author friend to do the same. Remember that there is more than one solution to a problem, and that different personality types respond in different ways to situations – that’s a key point for your characters too!

6 – Working to your strengths.

At the start of your collaboration, communicate your creative strengths to the other person. Explore the topics and themes that you enjoy, shared favourite books, and decide on division of labour. For example, Isobelle and I discussed the kind of characters we like to write. Personally, I enjoy writing from a woman’s point of view, so I chose a character that matched my preferences. Isobelle is the opposite, so she chose a character that matched hers. In research, I enjoy writing about historical elements such as food. Isobelle prefers researching geographical features, such as floor plans and setting.

Treat this like any partnership with fair exchange and respect, and you too will be writing a novel with a close friend with ease and creativity.

 

 

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It’s Time to Spring Clean Your Writing

Let’s spring clean your writing!

It’s spring cleaning season – so let’s take action and start with your writing (the housework can wait).

We’ll begin with the decluttering. 

Remove unnecessary adjectives and adverbs.

A good trick is to search for words ending in ‘-ly’, ‘-ive’, ‘-ous’, or ‘-al’. Obviously not all adjectives and adverbs end in these, but it’s a great way to find them!

Remove filler words and clichés.

Read your work aloud (or have your computer do it for you!). It will help you notice when your pace slows, when filler words appear, and when a predictable phrase or cliché rolls around. You can also ask for someone else to read your work.

Cut down on repetition.

We all have words that we overuse! To help with this, create a word bank. Your word bank will be words or phrases you lean on. In the meantime, check for these common ones: Nodding, smiling, breathing, quietly.

Reduce sentences that aren’t adding to the overall story.

First, check your dialogue for conversation that isn’t driving your narrative forward. Then, check for tangents. Have you gotten caught up in exploring a subplot or description?

Now, let’s freshen up your descriptions!

Use the senses.

Your character is walking through the town in which they live. What does the air smell like? How does it feel on their skin? What can they taste? Create an immersive experience for your reader by engaging their senses, and pull them right into the world you have created.

Get specific.

Avoid generalisations and use comparisons to help a reader understand what you are describing. Your character might be tall, for example, but it’s more powerful to say that they tower over the door of their enemy.

Use setting to reflect emotion.

Tolkien was a master at this – reflecting the emotion of a scene in the setting and atmosphere around the characters. Have a go – if your character is feeling despondent, how might this change how they view the world? Perhaps the once pink sky has now turned grey, the leaves on the trees turning to ash.

Feeling good? It’s time to trim your plot now. 

Revisit your timeline.

Are there any inconsistencies? Unnecessary time jumps? Check that you are telling your story in a way that will make sense for the reader. If you spot an inconsistency – don’t panic. You may need to adjust your timeline. For this – write out each chapter in one sentence, and then consider what can stay, what needs moving, whether you want to change what a chapter is about, or even if you want to condense any.

Remove filler scenes.

Are there any scenes that don’t advance your plot or character’s development? Sometimes in drafting, we can indulge in writing that isn’t actually moving the journey on. Review your plot and ask yourself with each chapter – what did this do to move my story forward?

Identify subplots.

Subplots are like chair legs – they need to hold up the main plot! If they don’t, they are their own story. So consider, what are your subplots, and are they all relevant and working for your main plot?

Great work so far. Let’s move on to polishing your dialogue. 

Make your character’s voice unique to them.

Consider that even people from the same place don’t speak in the same way. How is your character unique, and how will this change how they talk? As people develop, speech also changes. How will you show your character’s development through their dialogue?

Show, don’t tell.

Use dialogue to reveal emotions – show proof that they are feeling a certain way, instead of telling the reader. For example, show us that your character is angry instead of telling us that they are speaking ‘angrily’. (Need more info on this? See this post here!)

Use contractions.

People rarely say ‘I will not’ instead of ‘I won’t’. Use contractions to make your dialogue more natural and to mirror how people speak in real life.

Remove filler.

Though in reality, we say words such as ‘like’ or ‘um’ when we speak, too much of this in fiction can be jarring for the reader and slows down the pace of a story. Look out for these words in your narrative and remove any that repeat too often.

Phew. Apart from clearing your desk, there is only one task left! Let’s talk about refreshing your perspective as a writer. 

Take a step back. 

Taking a break can make all the difference. If you’re feeling overwhelmed, confused, or like you don’t know how to make your writing the best it can be, take a break. Take some time to review what’s worked for you too – we can’t move forward successfully unless we review what has and has not worked in the past.

Remember that there is always more to learn.

An education can help you reframe perspective. Engage in new writing groups, opportunities, or courses. Chat to other writers, or subscribe to a writing industry magazine. Engage with your writing community.

Revisit your old work.

How far have you come since you began your writing journey? Reflect on what you have done, where you have grown, and how your skills have improved. Make a note of them, and reward yourself. Being a writer isn’t easy, but you’re doing it!

Set new writing goals.

Try and remove the pressure of the overall ‘I want to write a novel’ goal. It’s too big to work towards, but if you break it down into manageable chunks, you’ll find yourself achieving it more easily. Need more help with this one? Grab The Ultimate Writer’s Planning Workbook! It’ll take you through the entire process.

There you have it writer, you have completed your spring cleaning task! Now it’s time to make a cup of tea and enjoy the warm weather.

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Ten Fantastical Female Characters Over Forty

Do you feel that the older you get, the more likely you are to take up arms and wage war against the orcs? I hear you. Female characters over the age of forty are not always common in fiction, and yet, in my experience, they have a unique and resilient perspective. Let’s celebrate some of the best female characters over forty in fantasy, to whet your appetite for rebellion and celebrate International Women’s Day 2024!

1: Galadriel – The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien

If we’re talking about female characters over forty, let’s start with one who is thousands of years old. A wise and powerful elf with a magical insight and a dark side that compels you to read on…I’d be on Galadriel’s team any day.

2: Catelyn Stark – A Song of Ice and Fire by George R.R. Martin

All right, I hear you, in the books she is below forty years old, but they upped her age for the show, so she does belong on this list. She is represented as a fierce protector of her family, a gentle and strong matriarch, a woman who doesn’t deny her pain and speaks her mind.

3: Granny Weatherwax – Discworld series by Terry Pratchett

One of my favourite characters on the disc has to be Granny Weatherwax, a formidable witch with a strong belief in her powers. She has a no-nonsense attitude but demonstrates her love for others in her own way, shaking off her intended ‘wicked witch’ title.

4: Morwen – Dealing with Dragons by Patricia C. Wrede

Another witch who won’t take any nonsense from anyone, this time flanked by a significant number of cats. YA is not just for kids (trust me, it’s okay. You don’t have to read it on your Kindle), and Morwen is an excellent example of a self-assured and powerful woman over the age of forty.

5: Moiraine Damodred – The Wheel of Time series by Robert Jordan

An Aes Sedai (servant of all), talented in healing and channelling the ‘One Power’. If you haven’t read the books, that probably doesn’t make much sense to you, but know this: Moiraine is both thoughtful and manipulative, a complex woman with a calm demeanour. That’s who I would want on my team.

6: Aunt Pol – The Belgariad series by David Eddings

Aunt Pol (Polgara) is an immortal sorceress, which is a pretty good job to have bestowed on you from birth. She is also one of the most feared and powerful women in the world, so if I didn’t put her on this list, it would be an injustice.

7: Professor Wendowleen Cripcot – The Finery by Rachel Grosvenor

A retired professor nearing 101, Professor Cripcot is ready to take down a totalitarian government with her pet wolf by her side. There’s no messing about when it comes to Professor Cripcot—she says what’s on her mind and will stop at nothing to fight for her rights.

8: Queen Talyien – The Wolf of Oren-Yaro by K.S. Villoso

It’s not easy being queen, and Talyien demonstrates her struggles and wins, navigating the difficult situations she faces in her complex political world. In short, she’s doing her best to protect her people, but sometimes that’s just not enough. As a side note, this series is called ‘The Chronicles of the Bitch Queen’. That’s enough to drive me to read it, anyway.

9: Kelsea Glynn – The Queen of the Tearling by Erika Johanse

Though she ascends the throne at nineteen, inheriting a broken kingdom, the reader watches her grow in age and strength until she proves herself to be a far more capable monarch than expected. Kelsea is a legend in the making.

10: Irene Adler – The Invisible Library series by Genevieve Cogma

A name you might recognise if you’re a fan of Sherlock Holmes, Irene is a spy and librarian for a magical and multi-dimensional library. In terms of cool jobs, a spy-come-librarian might even beat an immortal sorceress.

 

Do you want to write something magical featuring a strong female character? Stick around the blog, there’s lots to see!

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Publishing

How Do You Book a 1:1 with a Literary Agent?

First, let’s talk about why you might be interested in doing this. If you have a novel and it’s completed (you’ve edited it, taken it through a few drafts, and you’re feeling good about its condition), you might be thinking about or currently querying. A 1:1 with a literary agent can be so helpful for a few reasons. 

  • They give you valuable feedback on your query package. As these are the people receiving queries, they are the experts! Their feedback will help you improve. 
  • They can give you insider advice. Agents are up to date on literary market trends, publisher preferences, and more. All of this information can increase your chances of getting published!
  • To build a relationship. You’re not going to become best friends over a 15-minute phone call, but talking to an agent who represents your genre and having the opportunity to discuss your work with them is more impactful than sending an email. First of all, you are guaranteed their attention – and that’s huge. Often, submissions will be reviewed by an assistant first and won’t even make it to the agent you are contacting, so having the opportunity to talk to the agent you are querying is so valuable. 

If you’re ready to book that 1:1 – here are some options on how to do it:

  • Literary festivals. At literary festivals, you have the opportunity to pre-book (rarely is it first come, first serve on the day, so always pre-book) a face-to-face 1:1 with an agent. Festivals such as:

The London Festival of Writing

How to Hook an Agent Event by Bloomsbury Publishing

The London Book Fair

  • Online. Various writing organisations offer 1:1 sessions over the phone or on software such as Zoom. You can peruse the agents available to make sure that you will be speaking with someone who represents your genre. Here are a few:

I am in Print

Jericho Writers

  • Query. Querying is the traditional way to get an agent 1:1. The above ways are guaranteed because you book them in advance, but querying can lead to a chat with your chosen literary agent. Want to know more about querying? Check out the following blog posts:

3 Things to Avoid When Querying Literary Agents

5 Ways to Find a Literary Agent or Publisher

When to Follow up With a Literary Agent or Publisher

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Craft Publishing

Writing Competitions for 2024

Why enter competitions? 

It helps you get seen and gives you a headstart in building a writing portfolio.

What does it mean to build a writing portfolio? 

You might be familiar with this term if you have queried. Often, a publishing house will ask for an example of your portfolio or a ‘writing CV’. So, if you’re writing your debut novel…how do you build a writing portfolio?

Answer: By writing short stories, articles, and poetry and submitting them to anthologies, reviews, competitions, and opportunities. This shows that you are already putting yourself out there and connecting with a readership. This makes you more marketable!

February 

Writers’ & Artists’ Short Story Competition 2024

Lucy Cavendish Fiction Prize

March

The L. Ron Hubbard Writers of the Future Contest – Quarterly deadlines throughout the year

Micropoetry competition 2024: 200 years of creativity 

April

First Pages Prize

Tom Howard/John H. Reid Fiction & Essay Contest.

May

The Bath Novel Award 

The Yeovil Literary Prize 

The Bridport Prize 

June

Welsh Poetry Competition 

Short Story Competition – Anthology

July

The Lascaux Prize in Short Fiction 

V.S. Pritchett Short Story Prize

Manchester Fiction Prize

August

The Edinburgh Award for Flash Fiction
 
Aesthetica Creative Writing Award 

Aurora Prize for Writing 2024

September

The Lit Paul Cave Prize for Literature

Mslexia Novel Competition

October

Letter Review Prize for Unpublished Books

The Book Edit Writers’ Prize

Marlow and Christie Unpublished Novel Prize


November

Kurt Vonnegut Speculative Fiction Prize 

Leiby Chapbook Contest

Fabuly Writer’s Challenge

December

Daisy Pettles Writing Contest for Women 

Reader Views Literary Awards 

Elmbridge Literary Competition

Do you want to talk about what you can enter or what to write? Get in touch today! 

Note: It is up to the entering author to check any and all competitions before they enter, and to read the terms and conditions.